【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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我想我從未表露出
. G, i. S2 ~* L5 l深藏在我心底的那句
% m* L8 [# d0 i$ W' _: [我愛你  

" A+ n% h, A; C5 v. LFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
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7 m9 W, m2 B  r% r! T6 L在遇見你的第一刻
" h; A) E1 Q" V& q" q2 A1 w* [你已經深深的佔領了
我的心
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+ f. L; t3 ~8 j: uWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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3 l9 F3 u1 ]3 Q縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意

! u( j8 Q2 l) dIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
) ~( w: w" T. E; ~搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
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( Y6 w' {0 H0 d3 YLove… just the word love
; J, O1 Q# s1 I" ^8 t/ hWhy is it so difficult to express?

5 x% I: F6 [% P1 o" d愛  簡單的一句愛
5 e# Q3 e& P/ g0 d" R$ R為什麼
* X4 ?1 N0 k+ L: G) L2 }如此難以表白?
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5 u8 n2 D4 {  v( M8 T2 PI want to confess that I love you,
  I7 {0 U5 W( n" o$ r2 vBut I never did

& J1 S0 O( I1 |+ M$ ^" U+ y1 b愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來

0 X4 c) g+ |/ v0 X& {4 fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
8 Y( X# o% p( y0 \你將從我指間滑漏

) k% W/ B% ?* e: q9 g8 Q7 t+ gIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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* X) F0 v( _+ }希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
0 Q' P) w3 [9 z+ P) S+ X! h: n我心底的秘密

I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

- Z0 H4 Y) ?: l: tCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) m- X; _5 k5 C" V* t; _% |可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
! ~* p9 |7 ?, T% }2 I; y7 G- Y2 i收在你心裡
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Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來

' E" D; z1 F, A  |$ S7 e$ V9 j+ rOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
7 ?" P( v2 F7 [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
1 a4 f# I) l0 i- N讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密

; N- W* n9 T1 mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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) p2 S  w+ g3 P/ w6 W3 }可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
8 f3 y3 `# T& R1 B$ m0 Z收在你心裡
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9 J! K- o; H( GCan I entrust it to you?
" N8 t9 h: @1 _1 R% \6 }, zEntrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡
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2 }+ U. c" T. M  m& N对唱曲参赛译稿
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
% l0 a/ q+ K4 a1 R- hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& i- o* Q% R8 x0 a! gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

( a6 r, H9 ~% {# v# E. a) G* M皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
( F# m/ Q+ e# a凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂
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+ S1 G9 c- i) ~; l* e! l, uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; H- ]. R% e' d: ^. I* JThe sky is happy down to its soul
* o3 u# e: j/ R- ~! a% e* OWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
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月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
7 @5 H0 p8 P  m# Y月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂

+ W4 l; a: P# I/ b7 c* w3 TIt fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
* Q- H# ~/ Y; K2 V. Y終將逝去
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% c6 ~- y0 ^3 ?You needn’t fear anything
& w& Q, _( Q3 b& A( Q7 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

你勿須擔心憂鬱
5 y) Z! S- B% l8 n我心充滿著歡欣
4 I" B4 H" \& s愛你
) `- @% _2 i2 M9 R# |  [堅定不渝

  Q( F; P" H) x+ _' _9 lEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me

3 N( w' b* p) c7 ^. D+ [; q2 u你的一言一語都是愛
0 Q+ W" t) c: N0 e2 S我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love

我的愛 全心全意
你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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3 J( ^; \9 u1 [9 U. ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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' g" j# a7 C3 n4 M能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

I want so much to see inside your heart

/ K# q( V% U/ W% }" T我想看透你的心
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. V1 r* Q5 ^& {9 _0 D' gI invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die

我歡迎你將它打開
4 F( D5 O% {4 B# T5 Z我願意用生命
來證明我的愛
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( j: X9 p0 c( L$ ^I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

4 Z" N  d  e/ L+ A6 N) A0 {$ x! RI regret not dying
I only have one tongue
( g% A! {' s) oIt’s nothing close to 100,000

1 v  E7 V1 h: q- O' ~0 Y可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬

4 f+ S9 M) P+ e; `+ }$ W5 _With such a tongue as yours,
4 H3 s. i0 p: c' q' @. s! k5 y* FYour speech can’t even keep up with it

這樣一張巧舌
$ @0 t1 K2 m8 G0 R5 }3 x4 y你的言語都跟不上
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9 |5 V9 F4 ]% Z5 LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 i$ J/ {& U- I如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
: q# A3 I+ E# g2 Y7 s5 T4 \! u千萬個心思

Rambling on about a thousand words of love
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1 ~$ J! Y( H- X  s, P+ ~: h訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
; ]' D6 w7 H* Zxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

) t1 E! {3 \/ i) {是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒