【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" I' G# D5 Q, u9 t  K5 t歌词我附在后面。
9 C5 R  l6 ^% jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ J8 k" q9 ]7 _/ uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' R7 M( T4 K) r; y" }" TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ _: D  L) ~# p# M  FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 O6 q4 f* i) v+ xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% u: D' ?( i- M8 JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* s# H  O7 L: A- F" a/ X* nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 T) d; O) ]7 y8 T& RYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: o3 O6 A0 {! ^& x: ?4 o2 GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; b! l7 Y, p0 _6 ], `. J5 W# sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 i; s& g! c& Q# C% x1 a, U3 F2 {( ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& R+ [% Z1 X$ x8 c0 L4 T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# i$ ~  D* U/ O5 n2 i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 x5 @8 r# R" e/ J/ U1 R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- P7 e6 b+ V- ^4 g' x1 |" R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* \# i' l* p, E. c  ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! C+ C7 |/ ^2 G) o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 D; }# A8 V* }) [" c+ A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 h9 F/ s1 S- n$ d4 F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 D& R9 I( F" N# b. u# U" x/ S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! H. H' M$ c) k2 W/ m" Q, V: p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ v" k' L% i: J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 d5 F6 h% g& W- U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- ]& S$ V# N: o# y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 L0 N3 T( J( ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# M3 }: k+ G. k  g" e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 f: c. C6 s2 @: A' |+ l* P1 a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 ]" j( l7 o) d! J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" O: G; e  l2 q( {, D- D( Y- c7 w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ c9 s9 X( O8 w+ l2 P& \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 B, N: v- r5 ^. I. [5 x( v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* g4 p$ i8 b* X9 v<P>I regret not dying</P>
& W1 D/ T' _0 N: J1 r) w, p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' F. O. A( a6 y. h$ }' ?0 F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 L0 _( i3 w! R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 W" \8 G% F; N0 J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 ]' N5 E1 Z1 c! x6 W% J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 W0 ?3 Y5 @' Y! z5 _" B2 g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' b1 m7 m3 k; W) \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 }' y( ?, D9 P  G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 e( \' S# [" @<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% P. {: W0 n9 A% v/ t  p4 B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# s9 I% s3 M$ {( S, }% F$ u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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& _; L( ^& n2 T1 t" }  F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 C4 X) ~4 V& H/ p) F& b! ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>