【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: Q8 s% q0 B" `# zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 p0 e* W& G' g  [) M7 p' CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; [! c; q3 {$ y- t2 ZSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- |: K( P* j' B. @( t' A3 E- s' ]& f0 tYou needn’t fear anything
5 Q; \1 T# o/ E  Y" Z  @2 gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 o! [- }+ g/ O/ oEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( G. q( J6 }' I3 D& hNothing can compare to my love
( h  H, |0 V) z8 u, m" ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( ?. E! f/ V4 E- r1 q. b* K$ F% \0 mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. f' C$ {, l# i" n# @  k* BI want so much to see inside your heart
) v) S6 g, h- I% H2 Q# [8 XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# ~. d0 }0 N4 p8 Q2 p% p/ ]2 ]1 rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 M) R& B. B/ EI regret not dying
8 o- y0 }. y: N/ i/ i% I9 {0 }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) J6 c5 @- n- u/ E8 j5 w" n) VWith such a tongue as yours,
0 x+ z5 Y. f, U/ L' gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% `0 X+ C" |8 M6 N& I! l2 QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 U/ ]4 D' }" s0 v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" b9 w& r, L; K" ]  h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' G9 s8 G$ T- ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 Z  h  ^8 h; I% E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( f; h- |5 O! I* f- x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# U" C7 h) o: k2 k* n( j5 ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 s" W1 c: S7 ~8 I6 h: a" \8 w7 [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 Z" P, e. B6 |$ z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 G+ {2 F1 n. P, Z& E, G9 K( M<P>你无需担心</P>
( e1 \" b" N0 [, U# |3 f. @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 z7 X* Y/ y( P# w9 l: S4 p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; p$ A7 N4 R& o0 P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( B. N8 A8 T# P+ z8 ^+ h3 }/ K5 ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 y% v; `6 y& b- {( Y5 t6 a) Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 q( g' p) c: ~0 R6 w4 \1 q( o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ _1 ^# ?. R! a: B; \) W5 l. ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 \' N! w; h6 f4 Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! q) g6 V5 @1 q, L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 C4 Y8 M6 X' W5 K8 P$ F0 r4 B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 T7 B. {& z% ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! [0 _. Y$ p7 g+ Z* G+ v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ K$ [7 k5 n8 G0 U) L9 I7 K9 w1 x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 x' e. n& p) r0 G1 M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 T2 y0 g$ j# f' P' t4 `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' A9 f) r# ?( k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 E# O. w) d% r9 F* G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- P+ U& k1 E4 M9 ~8 Y1 ^/ J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& y' H# T0 p) X/ N: I! ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 [: w) ]1 O9 u+ j7 D: i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 `% [" e1 l% z& D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ }( A* C2 H, ~: A' ~/ w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>