【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
, F: w0 B2 U8 w8 _( EThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# A5 d5 A% B( I' ?6 I5 rFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
9 J9 U# D( e1 z% d+ ?5 `We meet and talk everyday,
! y+ K3 U- ?6 B1 BBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 {. l* i3 v1 F0 m' n% EIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- f+ G+ d0 z7 ~4 m# K* }I would probably know how you feel
6 b' q& {% i8 Y* eLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 i$ q1 p6 ~7 C2 U. yIf today isn’t too late,
, m$ K) D" w2 z2 w- A4 BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, E2 U/ }9 v) G* {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" j9 T4 s8 K. J: K8 ?Entrust my love within your heart
7 Y# f) z2 y. C" r* e* X' N7 ULove… just the word love
' `  n; s+ I2 w, P3 J1 W: p! A" yWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  `1 y+ |' w! dBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) _4 Y& F) z1 U' j: hIf today isn’t too late,
! K- {& |3 D# s! w8 H0 oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 f$ A% W0 q( n3 ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! p- p' M( u( ^: \* _. }Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. `1 r* U9 d+ f' t; aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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# G) ^  e! I% I8 Q; O% V[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- D9 S+ U* Y5 }. {, r<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, X* N% N1 L3 B' p/ {. d' N/ u2 R<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& J8 q* S8 d$ N& k6 Z( a<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
- k3 H* G! e/ n! y6 ?0 |6 T/ _1 b<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) e. n2 {6 d4 R: l- a( j6 h% B<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. [7 e7 W  M  l/ Y  d<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( Y9 t7 y# n' f7 ]<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; }' t  G" {7 Z8 m5 n# @<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
: x, z4 A" M9 g$ R4 K<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 {+ @& e! U/ o6 H+ _0 V<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# ~, d; r% i! R# e0 g<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  y) O# k6 F' g. L* Y<P>但我不会</P>
6 M$ Q! o3 R* B0 T1 ?<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 ?/ ^: `- X5 j<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
4 W2 u2 S/ }/ @6 c5 P: a! d<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% I/ }2 N  s" @+ V6 Y* r& b4 N- K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( s5 y3 H1 W; ~% a  W# E9 J6 }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, _! G; [$ R4 X) o* \/ g* }<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, I" `1 L+ T5 p. Z<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) V- ^6 M0 T  [" D& |" a' ^  o<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" ?7 F5 w5 P$ f' m1 f2 R<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 R" q, T5 H3 B: ~( T<P>But I never did </P>
+ |0 I2 B. {8 T$ c. J4 c0 Q<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ d' q$ e1 W5 Q7 A$ X% C6 ^! C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 e/ w0 a! K, m# G: Q$ f- U7 u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, Q  Y3 b$ ?$ ~7 `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. A1 Y' S2 y0 b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" X! a9 w% Y2 e6 S6 n* F( Q3 P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( i& z, M1 ]% m0 ~8 y+ `- M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( l/ ?3 V+ R, h1 ] 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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$ J! p$ c( F2 v2 a3 M$ L( H9 K这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! _8 K4 \, R0 h7 R/ d9 b<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 T2 \* l/ h6 o1 h% Z( e6 T/ e<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>