【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 z/ I9 ^8 g% LThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 f+ a  s- E9 ?/ x% |From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
+ r" A: q; {) @$ b5 O& [3 wBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 h' W4 ]% o( O" _  OI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, S! E2 x  k# c$ k6 B# H& L0 T7 GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* s: v" ?1 G  ^+ lIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" e+ b3 ^$ j0 M& vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 B' j0 E% V* Q9 i* Y2 K* S6 U9 rEntrust my love within your heart
4 r" I! r2 r% u$ ~# w# JLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 _& Y$ q' n( T; A0 K+ k7 M8 aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 S- B3 ]) [1 {1 `( d9 s* nIf today isn’t too late,
% A2 `$ z- W) T* U: M0 @4 P, C! B- \6 xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 {; r1 b4 k) H4 f5 N7 ?0 yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ H5 g3 a, s4 r" p& m7 `5 t& B+ TEntrust my love within your heart
- V- M% @( f; t8 k, zCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

' ~! t! h% u6 ]+ c[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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; k7 Y& b- T. r5 o+ T' P<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
0 q7 K7 S- F( B8 ^* H6 I! y, G+ I<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( o& I/ d5 X  ]7 o( H<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" _- i' P5 y& b' S9 h: g<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# u. W" f" S# \2 B<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 z$ b# ~* R: s2 o% v; h5 ~" H: Z<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( K# H. ^3 W3 |: U6 R$ m, \! R<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 M7 g, _3 ]! y1 C/ f8 E<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" X% i8 I+ K' a1 t<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. }' Z- Q5 B6 v<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; O4 M+ G$ c" Y  s% }9 i! N<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% r/ \/ p* \& k. Y; P" }& t<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# T% ?/ S0 q& U" Q2 F* E8 Z5 V: J<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' b  ?( p* Q( _  ?<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( N- A7 K# B/ L( a  i<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- b) U- Z& I2 N& i- N: {<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# N8 K7 w) |) i# X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 j& p' f3 u; _6 ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 P# L  f4 G/ ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 Y+ s' _2 f' t5 Z, G5 Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; N* E- y8 E3 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 ]- S7 N' v3 l+ R, L<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" K& o; P2 {: n& B& V<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ \4 S" `: @) u6 \. O' }2 X<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 X5 x7 e1 D7 w+ L/ w8 o<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
( a/ T( ^5 b+ J% P; y2 v<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 d; Q/ ~+ E9 A% H  r3 z! h<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 v5 k- k. v& y( v9 d<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 G. [7 K$ b- J8 P4 u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, h5 J* [0 q9 t) @5 h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; F! Q8 r6 ]7 @1 p# {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 T  J3 N( @8 Z& X: N8 i2 }; W<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

0 Z0 p" k# x7 h 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) w" l9 p' }6 X<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; {0 j  U! i# G. ~3 W& f1 t<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>