【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
2 U$ O3 Q# W, OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  v' o4 o! r  {. hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& N8 S/ s. A8 fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 ?: o+ A4 M. t; }8 e0 ZWith the moon kissing it every night
7 g- @$ c8 {6 A) rSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  l+ X$ O2 E: M. U9 n  kEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 D$ C1 C# Q% p1 d" W" M7 u  lI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 r1 J8 R0 e, R9 bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) [9 @8 ^. }6 ]1 V2 RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. M$ r' }* H) L$ |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* A, l0 C/ i+ Y' w& C8 _% W) GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: S9 x* L/ x  c1 ?0 R; c% [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ a+ ]# B0 a; Y" E+ ^$ T( u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 X; v5 N4 z0 u7 c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" T3 `; k" R* Y* U. i: J3 u% P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( S- h! k) m) a7 A6 @. q9 d" [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; }9 y; j( o4 A& u3 _& w( w% g- q, N5 V- b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! W) e0 X% K: E; D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 B  f( y3 w: a* L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 r5 I/ I9 P; o5 `9 _: A- X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 E& R" W/ x( L3 L8 g/ v+ u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 W: l* L" t- g! c$ S2 H; S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 @& U7 G, t& T; l1 A5 Y, a4 t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; s* s$ h. |& z$ H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 v: u$ n6 W. D; m7 ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& _7 c  S$ ~* g1 v9 x, x+ T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 {! H. Q9 C# L/ k9 A+ a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. z' I/ E" [  F7 }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* L3 s( k! q3 _. _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% q9 o( A8 O' W% }6 M6 i6 u0 i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, B. |! x- \, ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' E0 n' Y% g' F: \) G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 n7 U. M5 A+ N5 Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. u' T/ F1 c8 ?+ [3 I, g& B) l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- d  C5 S# ~% T4 }) e' d2 p; z1 @% t7 @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. _$ w6 o. j5 R' D: a- r) ?1 v- S<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 Z! G7 I' J% c9 v1 w# k+ ^5 ?( }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 B% q/ M% n" F- f7 _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' {" Y# _; X! ^/ x9 f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 y& T% j  l0 @  Y9 E# T; E; E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, g) }' M1 @7 G4 l+ ?' ]3 n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ [# D! C: {& ]1 w8 V* i, D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. U+ p) q" R- Q$ h我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>